pkalexkaz
01-25-2006, 10:35 PM
My story is based on Bleach,but it has some characteristics of some other anime too.I have divided the story in volumes and chapters.Only if you like it i will post the next chapter.Below is the first volume,first chapter.Tell me if you liked it!Thanks for your time.
[SIZE="5"]ANOTHER SIDE OF BLEACH
Bleach vol.1 Chapter 1:The strange monster
My name is Alex.I am sixteen years old and I live in the city of Athens in Greece.I go to the first grade of TEE for computers.I have two sisters and one brother.My older sister is seventeen years old and her name is Sofia.She realy is a chick,so me and my brother Gregory are having problems with every dumass that tried to hit her,just because they broke up.My brother is sixteen and he realy is overprotective with our younger sister,Mary who is thirteen.Our parents are business men so we don’t see them really often.In fact,it may even take a year for us to see them.The send everytime lots of money though so we live in quite luxurious life,but I work on my own for extra money.
This is just one part of my life.Another part is my friends and all the stupid things we do to laugh.I go to parties,I drink,I dance and many other bullshit.The closest friends of mine are John as Johny,George as Hog and one weird fellow but really a nice guy,Ivan Miller. Johny and Hog are Greeks and Ivan is from Mexico.These guys are pretty cool to hang out but I can talk with them and my family only about these two parts of my life.
The third part of my life is…ghosts.That’s right,they do exist,I talk,listen and touch them.I don’t know why but as long as I long as remember myself I see ghosts as clear as I a living. I know what are you thinking right now ”Hey this kid is nuts”or something.But it is true.My entire family can do that actually.But they just sence their precence not see them.Sometimes they see a blur but that’s all.I don’t know why I’m the only one that can see them.But I know this.Every time those ghosts ask something from me so then move to other side such as send away some people that they bother them in the place they died.This whole thing is tiring from time to time. The worst thing though,is lately their number is dramatically increasing.But I do have ordinary life such as my school and work so I don’t have time to run all the time and help them.
-Alex,wake up,man,we are going to be late!
-You litlle *****,when it is to wake me,do it more gently!Damnit!It’s 8!Oh shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!
Alex stood up and rushed to the bathroom.By the time he brushed his teeth and put some clothes on him,his family had already left.When he ate some quick breakfast,he took his schoolbag and run in the door.he was about to open it….BAM!!!Alex was so shocked by what he saw that he slipped on the floor.A group of ghosts!Not just one or two but at least ten!
-What the hell!?
-Young man…We seek help from you…
-What kind of help?And how come you are so many?Always it is the most one ghost.
-We have been all killed by a Hollow…Now it will probably come to devour our souls…
-Hollow?What it’s that?
-A Hollow is monster…A monster that likes to kill and then devour the soul to become stronger…
All of a sudden a strange howl and loud was heard!
-Aeahhooooooooooo!
Alex passed the ghosts to go see what this loud howl was.He ran towards the street and when he turned….He was more shocked than to see such a large group of ghosts.A huge monster,with a white mask and hole in the chest!
-That is a “Hollow”,said one ghost.It goes around to devour souls…But it prefers souls with high spirit force such as yours and your family’s…Beware!It’s going to attack you!
That was exactly what the Hollow was doing.With its big fist.it aimed towards Alex!Alex dogded literally the last second!
-Shit.How I fight something like this?
-While he was saying that a man with a red cape appeared!He drew a sword and attacked the Hollow!
-Iiiiiiiaaaahhhhh!
With a strong hit by this red-caped man right in the face,the Hollow dissapeared!
-Piece of cake,said the man.He turned to Alex.Now it’s your turn!
-What do you mean?Who are you?
The man smiled.It was finally time.
TO BE CONTINUED…SIZE]
[SIZE="5"]ANOTHER SIDE OF BLEACH
Bleach vol.1 Chapter 1:The strange monster
My name is Alex.I am sixteen years old and I live in the city of Athens in Greece.I go to the first grade of TEE for computers.I have two sisters and one brother.My older sister is seventeen years old and her name is Sofia.She realy is a chick,so me and my brother Gregory are having problems with every dumass that tried to hit her,just because they broke up.My brother is sixteen and he realy is overprotective with our younger sister,Mary who is thirteen.Our parents are business men so we don’t see them really often.In fact,it may even take a year for us to see them.The send everytime lots of money though so we live in quite luxurious life,but I work on my own for extra money.
This is just one part of my life.Another part is my friends and all the stupid things we do to laugh.I go to parties,I drink,I dance and many other bullshit.The closest friends of mine are John as Johny,George as Hog and one weird fellow but really a nice guy,Ivan Miller. Johny and Hog are Greeks and Ivan is from Mexico.These guys are pretty cool to hang out but I can talk with them and my family only about these two parts of my life.
The third part of my life is…ghosts.That’s right,they do exist,I talk,listen and touch them.I don’t know why but as long as I long as remember myself I see ghosts as clear as I a living. I know what are you thinking right now ”Hey this kid is nuts”or something.But it is true.My entire family can do that actually.But they just sence their precence not see them.Sometimes they see a blur but that’s all.I don’t know why I’m the only one that can see them.But I know this.Every time those ghosts ask something from me so then move to other side such as send away some people that they bother them in the place they died.This whole thing is tiring from time to time. The worst thing though,is lately their number is dramatically increasing.But I do have ordinary life such as my school and work so I don’t have time to run all the time and help them.
-Alex,wake up,man,we are going to be late!
-You litlle *****,when it is to wake me,do it more gently!Damnit!It’s 8!Oh shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!
Alex stood up and rushed to the bathroom.By the time he brushed his teeth and put some clothes on him,his family had already left.When he ate some quick breakfast,he took his schoolbag and run in the door.he was about to open it….BAM!!!Alex was so shocked by what he saw that he slipped on the floor.A group of ghosts!Not just one or two but at least ten!
-What the hell!?
-Young man…We seek help from you…
-What kind of help?And how come you are so many?Always it is the most one ghost.
-We have been all killed by a Hollow…Now it will probably come to devour our souls…
-Hollow?What it’s that?
-A Hollow is monster…A monster that likes to kill and then devour the soul to become stronger…
All of a sudden a strange howl and loud was heard!
-Aeahhooooooooooo!
Alex passed the ghosts to go see what this loud howl was.He ran towards the street and when he turned….He was more shocked than to see such a large group of ghosts.A huge monster,with a white mask and hole in the chest!
-That is a “Hollow”,said one ghost.It goes around to devour souls…But it prefers souls with high spirit force such as yours and your family’s…Beware!It’s going to attack you!
That was exactly what the Hollow was doing.With its big fist.it aimed towards Alex!Alex dogded literally the last second!
-Shit.How I fight something like this?
-While he was saying that a man with a red cape appeared!He drew a sword and attacked the Hollow!
-Iiiiiiiaaaahhhhh!
With a strong hit by this red-caped man right in the face,the Hollow dissapeared!
-Piece of cake,said the man.He turned to Alex.Now it’s your turn!
-What do you mean?Who are you?
The man smiled.It was finally time.
TO BE CONTINUED…SIZE]