Workaholic. A Poem

[Felonious Funk]

I'm far from a poet, folks. I probably won't write another one again. I still don't know why I took five minutes of my time to come up with this.

At any rate, sit back and enjoy. ;)

Workaholic
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I wake up this morning
And I look outside
The sun is shining
Realizing that
Driving to work is such a pain
Working at work is such a strain
To the brain, body, and soul
It kinda feels like I'm falling in a bottomless hole
Desperately thinking of ways to climb out
Struggling mightily as I try to see
The light
But, alas, I've lost the will to fight
Then I look outside
The sun is still still shining
And everything seems alright.

[_strangechild_]

Aww, that's nice!
I like the feel of that poem. It reminds me of the feeling when I work and hate it then when I'm all done I feel great and remind myself that it'll be worth it in the end.

[Byakuya7]

The poem does a great job when it comes to displaying a sense of reality, allowing the reader to relate to whats being said. The structure could use a little work, but other than that its pretty good.

[blazedsouls]

good too see theres poetic people inm this forum

[SLVR]

O that was cool. MAke another one if ya comeback